When an Ape wear Tuxedo

parable victim of luxury and agony

Shout and applause from the people

When an ape wear tuxedo appears under the curtain

The moment so glorious  like stand in the steeple

Glitter and sparkle paper fall like rain  

He takes a step with proudly 

looked up with a face full of vanity

a moment that so lively 

pride with a new personality

 

He seat  with full of  elegant

pointing  his fingers like a king in all his glory

his command like a testament

reverberation  sound of the music store

 

Look glorius and make me so amaze

but it's  only a part of playing in the circus

A monkey walking on the red carpet then play a dice

the pointing finger just beg for reward in purpose

 

Common situation that makes a stumbles 

pleasure and luxurious blinded the eyes

fallen in the same illustration when an  ape wears a Tuxedo

playfully  in the hands of  master's games

14 July 2014 Edward Lancheister

 

Reviews

[Marie]

The idea of apes wearing human clothing and being set to act like people has never appealed to me. But I find this poem charming.

[Dean]

great idea, but you need to perfect your use of English. Otherwise, write in your own language.

[Edward Lancheister]

i think its already good, the scenario already build. i had check spelling and grammar and nothing wrong with that, sorry Dean, i must disagree with your opinion

[Dean]

have an English teacher look at it.

[Marie]

He's getting the message across. THe phrases "He takes a step with proudly..." and "He seat with full of elegant" are unique.

[Dean]

unique indeed. I do not wish to argue

[Matching Socks]

What totally unique poem.
I'm so glad I chose this one to read first of all yours.
Loved it.

[Edward Lancheister]

there still many poem that unique like "the key", " in the surface" hope you enjoy. its more than romance, try to capture from my research. thank you for stop by

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure. :)

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you very much Ance :)

[Konigin]

This is so awesome Edward!!!!!!! The idea behind it is amazing. The message you wove into it was cool. :) I love it! Great pen my dearest friend!!!! ^.^

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you very much Chelsea, your review encourage me to write much more better

[Konigin]

You are most welcome Edward. :) I hope that you do. You write very well my friend.

[Edward Lancheister]

i just edited several lines to add more moment :)

[Konigin]

I saw! Well done! :)

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Chelsea

[Konigin]

You're welcome