A Poem by Edward Lancheister

When the show end 
and the lights turn down 
People walk away  one by one 
And silence become my best friend 

Lie down my back to the ground 
See the cloud moving by wind 
Prevent the moon that shine 
Just coldness what i feel inside 

The world keep going around 
as the time move forward like a bound 
no matter how far i could go 
always back and begin from zero 

Reason to be love 
a need to be live 
between decision and choices 
bring consequences 
like a destiny that faithfully await to be taken and fulfilled 

Show me the reason 
If life is not just a part of any season 
like a theatre of life 
pulled by the string of believe 
i keep my fingers on guitar strings 
a song that can't be sing 
to find my reason for next path of decision 

 A reason of what i will become

© 2014 Edward Lancheister

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Wow, beautiful. The images convey so much more than at first glance. I especially like the stanza about music. The only thing is in the line "a song that can't be sing" should be "a song that can't be sung", but I still get the meaning. Very nice.

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Edward Lancheister

5 Years Ago

thanks for have stopped by and read my poem.

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Added on October 15, 2014
Last Updated on October 16, 2014
Tags: love, life, faith, philosophy, words, broken


Edward Lancheister
Edward Lancheister

E.L Celestial, United Kingdom

simply person that like to write from the things i see according to my notes from travelling and research, try to convey things that capture by eyes, camera or feel by sense. for me poem is more than .. more..