Why am I here?

Why am I here?

A Poem by Efxaris Arampatzi
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"Why am I here?" is a poem, a haunting reflection on self-doubt and the search for meaning, exploring the struggle to find purpose in a world that feels indifferent.

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Am I just a shadow in my corner?
 Another pointless breath? 
Does it even really matter,
 If I was born of science or in nature's depth?

 A thought passes through my head 
Before sleep I ask the pillow on my bed
 Longing for an answer to hear 
 Why am I here? 

 Will I be the star of the family? 
Will I stay the monster John? 
He who people love to make fun of for infinity 
 Laughing at him endlessly on?

 Too many questions forming
 My heart begins racing 
 Am I the one going insane 
Or does the world wish to keep me chained? 

 As my breath falters, the voices in my head, I ask them 
Did the world break me, or my desire to be a gem? 
Silence for a while, then with a trembling hand, I release the fight,
 And fade into silence, swallowed by night.

© 2025 Efxaris Arampatzi


Author's Note

Efxaris Arampatzi
I was inspired to write this poem by the wonderful writer's, Twilight's, stories (Nature's Friend and The Survivalist) Thank you Twilight for letting me get inspiration from your beautiful work, it is truly amazing and I hope I connected the two stories exactly as you wanted! (by the way i am talking as if I were John so none of these things apply to me I am happy with my life :D)

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In the first verse, it's implied that you don't think it matters; whether you're a product of nature's "depth" or science. But, remember that nature itself is studied as a branch within science; when people study biology. But, it's still a strong opening verse; which raises meaningful questions.

The second verse seemed to emphasise, how even in your bed alone; you sometimes ponder the question of - "why am I here?".

Verse three, poses the question; of whether or not you will shine forth as a star for your family. Sadly though, it also asks if you might become a laughing stock; or mocked by people. No, darling friend. It is more likely, that you will shine in some ways; and not others. And, your genuine friends; would not mock you in cruel ways. Even if a few strangers laughed at you, take no notice. After all, they would not know the real you.

In verse five, you seem almost on the brink of feeling overwhelmed; feeling so vexed by your deep question. But, even the Ancient Greek and Roman philosophers; could not clearly define -"who am I?". So, no reason why you should expect to answer this question on too deep a level.

"Did the world break me, or my desire to be a gem?" As a teenager, it's way too soon; to even imagine that the world may have broken you. And, I am sure that you are a "gem" to the people who matter in your life. Furthermore, try not too be too hard on yourself.

By the way, ignore those critical comments by Glenda (in her review). She is an adult, but seems to have completely missed the point of your thoughtful poem.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

4 Weeks Ago

Everything you said in your review is absolutely true! Both about the poem like you have understood .. read more



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Nice work!! This makes me think myself deeply

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much Stella!! I'm glad you like it!
Powerful work. Very well crafted and pensive writing.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate the review!
A very poignant poem about self reflection; you question your emotions your ego, your existence and much of it is sorrowful… yet I think many of us question ourselves about why we are here on this planet;,your words are very expressive and your content is very honest and real; thank you for sharing this very personal poem.
Warmly, B🌷🌷🌷🌷

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words Betty! We all question ourselves but thankfully most of us mak.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Weeks Ago

You are very welcome!!
Warmly, B
I love twilight, And I think his is amazing, such a well written write.
very talented


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your review Kim!! I really appreciate it! Yes, he writes masterpieces!
Kim S.

2 Weeks Ago

not a problem at all. Enjoy your day.
Efxaris Arampatzi

2 Weeks Ago

Have a wonderful day as well :)
"Does it even really matter, if I was born of science or in nature's depth?" Wow, beautiful and true. Too often we all ask ourselves the same questions.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your review Milena! It is true yes!
I really like this. I’m sorry that I don’t know about Twilight, but I literally like how you chose the words and expressed something like dark emotions.
I feel like you have similar sense to mine in how you see the world, somehow.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the review! Twilight is a writer here on WritersCafe and he has written lots o.. read more
This was beautiful and heartfelt. I imagine John as someone a bit awkward trying to make sense of his life, like many of us do. Your ability to provide this imagery is stunning at your age. Thank you for sharing your writing and please continue to do so.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the review and your kind words Lisa! I really appreciate you!!!
Your poem is deeply emotional and thought-provoking. The raw vulnerability and introspection make it truly impactful. Beautifully expressed, Efxaris!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much Martiya! That was exactly my goal, for it to be full of emotion, so I'm glad you t.. read more
You nailed it! I get it! Thanks :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for the review!! I really appreciate it!
It’s been a minute since I read Frankenstein but this felt somewhat reminiscent of that. Dunno maybe that’s just me but it was a pretty strong mental image for me while reading this. Although, in that context it was more like some sort of weird hybrid conversation between the monster and Frankenstein while somehow still being only one voice. For whatever that’s worth…

Off of that little tangent. This definitely hit the emotional notes you were going for from the description. You captured the feeling of angst that comes from trying to understand where you fit in the world.

Since it’s written from the perspective of John and I do not believe that to be you, I hope these aren’t necessarily things you’ve felt so far. If so, I would say it’s somewhat unwarranted to feel so down especially if you can write like this.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Efxaris Arampatzi

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much! I wasn't inspired by Frankenstein's style of writing at all but if that's good I .. read more

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