a slice

a slice here

a slice there

who really cares

 

walking through life

marks on your body

its something thats hard to control

 

people see the line

then turn there back

your too hard to deal with

 

if someone knew

if someone understood

it would be better

 

mabey you'd stop

but till someone cares

it will never be better

Reviews

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... ah ... yeah ... well-said ... wish it was better ... :( ... however, what's good is that the title and the first three lines are brilliant ... the rest of the verse flows and flows ... and this is a great read ... no doubt ...