Lips

Lips

A Poem by Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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About unanswered questions.

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Sitting next to you
I felt my lips getting numb
Because the blood 
Running inside them 
Wanted to know
How the blood 
Running
On your own lips 
Flows

© 2017 Elizabeth J. Gelinger


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Ok picky I know but did you smack him? He seems to have blood 'on' his lips lol!
Another piece that portrays someone fixated with someone else.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Unanswered? or perhaps they weren't asked?

Seems so many pause in their silence ...only to continue it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Short, light and direct. I like this alot!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very sensual and a very creative way to say, "I wanna kiss you :P"
Enjoyed reading this

Posted 4 Years Ago


Like a daydream
thought out loud
imagining what would happen next...

Posted 4 Years Ago


how interesting! lots left to the imaginations .. am i with someone who just doesn't shut up ..and i am getting ready to punch those lips ..or am i waiting for a chance to kiss those lips ..hm very interesting indeed ..your description only increases my wondering .. :}
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is simple, and it holds a certain curiosity about it. I like this

Posted 4 Years Ago


I can help but chuckle because I have seen young people out on a date looking uncomfortable, and now I am wondering how many of them were thinking like this? I love this idea and feel motivated by it and I am considering writing something like this. Bravo! When you can inspire other writers you have done a great job five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Nice use of words. You create place and a vision. Your good description made the situation come alive. Thank you Elizabeth for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2017
Last Updated on March 31, 2017
Tags: love, poem, poetry, unrequited, lips, blood

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Elizabeth J. Gelinger
Elizabeth J. Gelinger

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