A Child- Little Miracles

A Child- Little Miracles

A Poem by Elizabeth Carter
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I don't know which title I like more... So I just put them both!!

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A river…

 

Cleanses the world

Of imperfection and sin.

 

The sun…

 

Shines little rays of sunshine

On the darkest of days.

 

A snowflake…

 

Drops with purity

On the coldest of palms.

 

The wind…

 

Moves  forward

When everything seems stuck.

 

A rock…

 

Stands strong and sure

When nothing else can be relied on.

 

A child…

 

Is as all of these

Bringing little miracles to each day.

© 2013 Elizabeth Carter


Author's Note

Elizabeth Carter
A child is so innocent, loving, and forgiving, and I couldn't think of a better way to portray that than through nature! Hope you like it!

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Your words give out a vibe of purity and innocence. Everything is a miracle to the eyes of a child. How very beautiful. If only we could be more like children and see the beauty in everyday things. Age makes us bitterer. What I would not give to see this world again through the eyes of a child. This poem reminded me of that. Keep writing. X



Posted 5 Years Ago


Succinct and yet very meaning. Very nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The best that all these things that nature gives us for free. the wind is the best part. Very well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice poem.....beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice poem.....beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice poem.....beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice poem.....beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 1, 2013
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Tags: river, cleanse, imperfection, sin, sun, sunshine, dark, snowflake, purity, cold, wind, rock, strong, child, miracle

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Elizabeth Carter
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My writing come from my heart, and my emotions, and I hope that you will be able to connect with it, and enjoy reading it! I don't try to stick to any way of writing so my work will more than likely b.. more..

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