THOUGHTS

THOUGHTS

A Poem by kitty
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They can be conjured up. They might appear spasmodically.They can be premeditated. They are the making of man, woman or child!

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                     THOUGHTS
There is a thought watching its captor
yearning to escape captivity ~ to spread
             across the page >>>
choosing time and effort to make itself known,
known to ears willing and able, eyes anxious to see.
Communicate it must ~ to be understood, acted upon
              and somehow put in motion.
Debatable this rising urge to express itself ...
be it logical, comical, rational or educational.
Its formidable skill at formulating ideas springing 
                          from the mind.
Assisted by the eyes they latch on, in coheasion
with the brain to create a miriad of different ideas.
Thoughts ~ yours and mine cover the widest expanse
of expressive behaviour, in the making of man or animal.
created @ 3.30pm on the 20th February 2019

© 2019 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Ever thought of the origin of thought and what one wou;d do without them?

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oh my...you know i would like this one...really excellent metaphor carried throughout this poem.
funny to think that our initial thoughts before being expressed are like prisoners...we cage them and we watch them...and when we think they are safe for others to be around...we unlock the door and let them out.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

Yes we have to be careful that we harbour good ones eh! Thanks Jacob for this visit and review.



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Brilliant brilliant one dear wonderful Kitty! the way You started speaking with the tongue of a thought was amazing, "communicate it must" how I love this, yes it needs to be released, revealed, free... and through Your words I see creativity, creation, inspiration... I see us poets... Thank You for keep sharing Your "THOUGHTS" with all of us here!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

Good and creative 'thoughts' make this world a more liveable space for sure.
lightsong

2 Years Ago

and I can't agree more with You, my good and creative friend :)
Creativness or maybe creation. The expression of who we are as a being. Where dpes the thought process begin. Great reflection. Welldone👍

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

Thank you for this kind visit and review. Thing to reflect upon eh!
How very interesting, I would probably liken pre thought to that of a reflex, but now ya got me thinking and it hurts some.. thanks.. N :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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kitty

2 Years Ago

Active brain...exercise! Makes Jack less of a dull boy!
Neville

2 Years Ago

so they say.... and who am I to argue :)
Something we take so much for granted kitty without stopping to really appreciate what we have been blessed with. For a start we would be like zombies, no creativity, no poetry. Next time my muse is driving me nuts with her invasion late at night, I will pause and reflect and not be so harsh on her. I like the idea of those thoughts being like prisoners, waiting for an escape route. I enjoyed that very much. Thoughts can be persistent little wotsits can't they? Hope all is good with you dear kitty.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

There are so many things we take for granted ,when on second/ contemplative thought. Gone on strike.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Good for you. Take it easy. I'm doing less these days too. More time for things I do enjoy :) Look f.. read more
kitty

2 Years Ago

Ta! Just got to get them filed to retrieved!
I can truly say I never thought in that vein before. But it would be a sad day if I could not entertain a thought much less have one. A very clever display of what makes us cognizant and emotional creatures and to be able to convey that to others. All that would be left is acting on impulse or intuition without regard for consequence. A very good write...loved it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

Thanks for this review Crowley. Without 'thought' where woulh we/what would we be? Have You ever tho.. read more
Crowley

2 Years Ago

I truly never have til now. It would be the Walking dead I think...lol.
oh my...you know i would like this one...really excellent metaphor carried throughout this poem.
funny to think that our initial thoughts before being expressed are like prisoners...we cage them and we watch them...and when we think they are safe for others to be around...we unlock the door and let them out.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

2 Years Ago

Yes we have to be careful that we harbour good ones eh! Thanks Jacob for this visit and review.
They wont be ignored either Kitty, it's a matter of sharing them or they wont let you sleep either :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stella Armour

2 Years Ago

haha, don't worry Kitty , we have been friends long enough to overlook such things x
kitty

2 Years Ago

Love and blessings!
Stella Armour

2 Years Ago

and back to you my friend..

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Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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