SNOWFLAKE

SNOWFLAKE

A Poem by kitty
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Words to accompany a musical piece created by a family member.

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                         LITTLE SNOWFLAKE

Dance little snowflake,
flutter merrily to earth.

   Gather all your family and friend (s)
   Come play with me: we will roll around,
     and even tumble to the ground.

Make no sound - just sparkle gleefully
Fun with children who'll join our company.

   'Angels' on the ground  we'll make
   Waving arms and legs it'll take.

Roll you up in biggest ball >>> 0 
Ready, aim, toss - they'll surely fall!

Little Snowflake - fun to watch
so evasive if we try to catch!

   On bleak and coldest day
   when I am locked inside and can't go put to play:
   oh little snowflake, I do wish that you would stay!
Created on Sunday 24th December 2017

© 2019 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
We wish but we have no control over the inevitables of nature!

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I love the imagery you included!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

Thank you for visiting my humble page.
but you have nice control of the lyrics...and i tried as i read this to imagine the musical score to accompany...
i was trying to catch it like the speaker was trying to catch the snowflake.
but we both melted before we touched the ground.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

Found the edited version after I posted but not to worry, will post no.2 later. Thank you for your f.. read more
Very nice, Kitty. Would fit in very well in a volume of poems for children.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

5 Years Ago

Simple words from a simple heart. Try to write for the wider spectrum. Your feedback is much appreci.. read more

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Added on April 9, 2019
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kitty
kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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Mature writer. Would like to explore the possibility of posting small humble pieces on this site. Have self published and am seeking further advancement of of recent creations. more..

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A Poem by kitty