JUST LET GO

JUST LET GO

A Poem by kitty
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When things don't work out do not sit there feeling sorry for yourself ...just dust yourself off and let go!

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               JUST LET GO!
Let go of sorrow and woe >>>
   The tide has come in, cleansing the shore
             of bad dreams.
    dreams that took back all of what was given,
    when all your life you have striven.
Sharks are out there: they are all around,
so keep your feet firmly on the ground!
   Confidence in all you woo ***
   Banish every putrid air, success be the aim in view.
With a broken heart to repair x x x
just deep breathe fresh ozone air!
Let go of the cruel past >>>
cherish only good and decent memories that last!
Created @ 12.15pm on Wednesday 15th April 2015

© 2019 kitty


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kitty
Retrieved from the archives...in a 'spring clean'

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not only do i like the theme here...i like the way you brought in the perfect metaphor of cleaning out pollution....as cleaning out that which is polluting our hearts and minds...and making us feel the
awful scent of unhappiness, of defeat.
excellent write.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


kitty

4 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for this visit and for showing an interest in this piece. As you can see I have gone.. read more

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kitty
kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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Mature writer. Would like to explore the possibility of posting small humble pieces on this site. Have self published and am seeking further advancement of of recent creations. more..

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A Poem by kitty