SOFT SUMMER BREEZE

SOFT SUMMER BREEZE

A Poem by kitty
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The slightest experience can trigger of the creation of a 'piece' no matter how insignificant.

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                              SOFT SUMMER BREEZE

like velvet teasingly passed over bare knees
                feeling so at ease.
Gentle the thoughts that float lazily through
               the portals of the mind,
feelings of a rare and sentimental kind.

Emagine exotic dancers passing through
 swaying, softly scented chiffon curtains ...
bringing to mind sweet melodies - a catalyst
               of sensuality and grace,
wafting into an all embracing space.

Soft summer breeze ~ embraces the magic
of romance that shapes our reality.
Created @ 8.30 pm Saturday 3rd August 2019

© 2019 kitty


Author's Note

kitty
Time to be at ease and appreciate the softness of the cooling breeze.

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great alliteration in this...this poem proves why you are a poet...not only the delivery of the thought but the fact you notice the little things and how important they are to the overall scheme of nature and life.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


kitty

4 Years Ago

Thank you 'J' for a lovely review on my hemble piece. I try to draw on life's experiences, sharing s.. read more
kitty

4 Years Ago

'Humble' ****
Wonderfully written,
This is really enjoyable, Kitty.

I can sense that kind of breeze that comes with healing, soothing the breaths and blowing away every worry.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Years Ago

Good to see you on page with a kind review. Very grateful for this visit.
Indeed a quite elegant reminder that we should lierally stop and smell the roses and be thankful for what we have. There is a sensuality to this too in the images put forward in the fabrics and dancers.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kitty

4 Years Ago

Thank you John for feeling the sensuality in my humble words. Thank you for this visit.
This is the time of true appreciation and reflection on the good things in life that are free!

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on August 6, 2019
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kitty
kitty

Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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Mature writer. Would like to explore the possibility of posting small humble pieces on this site. Have self published and am seeking further advancement of of recent creations. more..

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A Poem by kitty