See Right Into Me

See Right Into Me

A Poem by eleniel

And this is why I never talk,

this right here,

this is why I won't walk away,

and give the chance to hear.

Cause I know that no one would ever understand,


All you do is demand.

This and that,

Though nothing is ever good enough,

Nothing right here.

So who cares,

Who gives a damn what I go through.

This past year,

No one, that's who.

Honest answer,

sad and true.

So of course all I do is curl up in bed,

because really nothing more can be said.

I do try to talk,

Though you just ignore,

Yeah, been there, tried that, it won't help no more.

Not possible. Impossible to understand.

Don't demand. Please don't demand.

Let me be.

Then maybe you can see.

Maybe you can see right into me.

© 2010 eleniel

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I can see tears in poem. Indeed, the hardest part of all is having no one to talk to, and no one to listen to. I'm feeling you well on this.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is another beautiful poem and I feel you!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 24, 2010
Last Updated on June 28, 2010
Tags: poem, depression, anger, sadness, confusion, demand




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