Uncertainty

Uncertainty

A Poem by Silvia S.

There are times when she’ll be missing love:
The feeling to love and to be loved back in return,
which perfect would be the fittest word to explain.

However, the situation is like this:
She’s kind of a piece of puzzle, which is still unsure of the shape it is in,
so is another shape it is looking for to complete.

© 2015 Silvia S.


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This is quite a brilliant piece, however, it is quite short. Expand and some of your comments. Other than that. Stellar.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a very decent poem but you should be more descriptive

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on April 3, 2015
Last Updated on April 13, 2015
Tags: emptiness, empty, empty soul, empty heart, feeling, life, love, love life, alone, lonely, loneliness, lonely soul

Author

Silvia S.
Silvia S.

Indonesia



Writing
Petrichor Petrichor

A Poem by Silvia S.