Addio, Amore

Addio, Amore

A Poem by Silvia S.

Maybe
I was like a rose to you
Alluring from a distance
Hence you came after me


These velvety maroon petals
Who wouldn't fall within seconds?
A grab on the beneath stem
At last you felt my hidden thorns


I said to myself
We're all imperfect, after all
For thou shall know what love is
A will to suffer yet to forgive

© 2015 Silvia S.


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I love it. Keep writing. Your way with words are truly a gift.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silvia S.

6 Years Ago

thank you :)
This is again a wow piece, I love how you play with the words to describe the beauty of rose as attraction and thorns as imperfection.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silvia S.

6 Years Ago

thanks! appreciate it :)

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Added on April 19, 2015
Last Updated on June 8, 2015
Tags: love, loss, farewell, goodbye, breakup, broken heart, broken hearted, wound, wounded heart, sadness, sad, emotion, metaphor

Author

Silvia S.
Silvia S.

Indonesia



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