Reverse Psychology.

Reverse Psychology.

A Poem by mess of gorgeous chaos

I can feel these memories fading
and I can feel this relationship slipping.
It seems every time was to have loved and lost,
how do I know if it was ever
even love at all?
And so the saying goes, out with the old
and in with the new
What if
the new needs pushing far?
What if
the old needs holding on?

© 2013 mess of gorgeous chaos


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Very nice, more want than need but used in a great wording.


Nice job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good, the poem is about you will never know until you taste it, how about instead of breaking away, you ask for a separation, and you go taste baskin robbins flavors, that way you can compare.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

10 Years Ago

hmm, an interesting way to put it! So true though. Thank you for your input!!(:
An interesting take on the common saying with great style, really made me think! Great work, you're so talented :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

10 Years Ago

awh, thanks! :) Glad it made you think!
Holding on and letting go - a lifelong struggle for balance. Good write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

10 Years Ago

thank you! :)

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Added on July 16, 2013
Last Updated on August 7, 2013
Tags: memories, old, new, lost, love, relationship, wanding, questions, saying

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