We Just Didn't Make It

We Just Didn't Make It

A Poem by mess of gorgeous chaos

Sometimes Cupid’s arrow eventually wears off

and love at first sight doesn't return for the second glance.

Sometimes you can’t do much about it

when everything is ruined by circumstance.


We could have been soul mates

but we just barely missed.

We could have been forever lovers

but we just didn't make it.

Maybe we were meant to be together

at another time

or in another life.

© 2014 mess of gorgeous chaos

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......I've been there.......a few times. And with this poem, I feel like I feel it again. Well done! This is powerful and profound.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Nailed the feeling. I really like this, the somewhat distance and longing in this poem is quite beautiful. Well written, keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mess of gorgeous chaos

8 Years Ago

thank you, it means a ton, and Im glad you got the same feeling that I was aiming for!

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2 Reviews
Added on December 13, 2014
Last Updated on December 13, 2014


mess of gorgeous chaos
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