Apartment 10

Apartment 10

A Story by Monster ^.^
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Something is terribly wrong with the bedroom...

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I entered the apartment; a look of approval upon my face. But I was too sleepy, what with the moving and all. I put down my bag and headed to the bedroom.


At the sight of the bed, my heart skipped. Finally, I’m able to rest after the long day!


I laid, face down on the sheets. Ah! So soft.


But as I was drifting off into the arms of Morpheus, I felt drops of water on my back. What the…? I muttered with extreme irritation. I turned to where it came from… goodness gracious, there is no roof!

© 2013 Monster ^.^


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i don't get it . . .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Ouch. hahaha. It's actually pretty literal :)
What a surprise! I like the down to earth feel. It could happen to anyone. It was amusing dear friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Now, you're scaring me! Hahaha
Priscilla Sayers

11 Years Ago

Lol:)
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

:)
There are more stories like that that I wrote, you know :))
This is really amusing. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

I'm happy you did :)
though the poem awesomely fantastic worth reading but it seems incomplete. You gave the intro but the climax seems to be missing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Well, it's for a 100 words contest... exceeding that number would obviously disqualify me :)
critic h

11 Years Ago

oooh
critic h

11 Years Ago

Btw which 100 words contest u were talking about. Post the link plz
haha very nice. People always think short stories need to be long, when in reality they can be as short as a sentence. I like what you did with this here. I will be sure to take a peek at more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Thank you Aeneas... and your name reminds of a book entitled Aeneid, where a hero with your name sta.. read more
May I make a suggestion for the first line? You could go with
"a look of aproval upon my face."

Just a suggestion tho! I loved the rest of it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

That does sound better! Thank you :)
AWickedMoon

11 Years Ago

Anytime! :)
oh no! :) Didn't expect that ending! I appreciate that twist, made for a fun read! Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
this is really good! and funny too, the ending is brilliant too! loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

I know you can pull that off! I sense you have good sense of humor :)
Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

thank you :D i'll try
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

Good :)
You need to THINK in English in order to WRITE in English. Translating your thoughts loses the flavor.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

11 Years Ago

Hmmm... contests give exposure - someone else to read and "approve" of your effort. We have to be c.. read more
Monster ^.^

11 Years Ago

indeed, I get your point... nevertheless, joining contests is fun...
Chris

11 Years Ago

can't win the lottery if you don't invest in a ticket...

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Monster ^.^
Monster ^.^

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