Apartment 10

Something is terribly wrong with the bedroom...

I entered the apartment; a look of approval upon my face. But I was too sleepy, what with the moving and all. I put down my bag and headed to the bedroom.

At the sight of the bed, my heart skipped. Finally, I’m able to rest after the long day!

I laid, face down on the sheets. Ah! So soft.

But as I was drifting off into the arms of Morpheus, I felt drops of water on my back. What the…? I muttered with extreme irritation. I turned to where it came from… goodness gracious, there is no roof!

Reviews

[saratogaparty]

haha

This is just that moment everyone can relate to right there.

Good job!

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks! :)

[Em]

This is great. I like how you lead up to the end.
Great work.

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks Em :)

[Em]

You're welcome

[KeeD]

Haha, what the !! :P I loved this, made me laugh, was well written too build the suspense.

[Monster ^.^]

Happy that I made you laugh :) Thank you :)

[Marie]

I really like this; it made me laugh. Holly Mason is right.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you Ma'am! Happy that you liked it :)

[Holly Mason]

really should of done a walk through hahah nice write thanks

[Monster ^.^]

:) thank you as well :)

[Joanna Maharis]

A captivating story. Very engaging.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you :)

[Zah Nita]

:) lol that caught me by surprise. I like this one.

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you for that Zah Nita! :) It's great that I did :)

[elastagirl]

lol sounds like some of the places I have lived in.

[Monster ^.^]

Wow. Tell me about it.

[Bella]

Great job. I like it. Good imagery

[Monster ^.^]

Thanks.

[Helena]

I can just imagine that! Great prompt write indeed. Thanks for submitting this to the contest. ~ Helena

[Monster ^.^]

Thank you! :)