Rush

Rush

A Poem by SilentDreamer

 

We gather at the door

Waiting for it- that sound

Of the bell

That releases us.

When it does ring

We stream through the

Doorways, into the hallways

Like the current of a river,

Feet pounding.

Voices chattering,

Almost indistinct

Like the hum of bees.

Smells melding together in

The air.

Constantly being jarred and

Bumped about

Like traveling on a

Country gravel road.

© 2012 SilentDreamer


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Love it (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


yeah this is what it sounds like at school. good job!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice way of describing how it's like being in school.. =)
Another short poem but i enjoy these pieces you write. You express them so nicely. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


GOOD OBSERVATIONS OF THE WORLD AROUND YOU .. I LIKE !

JASMINE ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


That poem is very original in a way of writing, the words and melody! I love this kind of short poems, because they emphasize more so the words really can be effective! very nice...
~nia~

Posted 7 Years Ago



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☼ Hey! Well I'm a writer, of course. I love hanging out with my friends, writing, reading, shopping, being outside, listening to music, cooking, gardening, photography, acting and playing guit.. more..

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