Rise of the Wind

Rise of the Wind

A Poem by SilentDreamer

The alarms rang

Crashing through the towns.

Uprooting fear,

Taking down assurnace

And safety.

 

The little girl ran

With her family trailing.

Only to find later

Her santuary,

Her home

Had gone and

Fallen

With the rise of the wind.

© 2012 SilentDreamer


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This poem, despite being brief, creates a concise, clear story. It could serve as a caption under a picture on a wall. Also, it conveys the emotion of losing a sense of security during storms or other disasters.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


It is so sad. But it is AMAZING.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is very interesting. good job!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really brilliant poem, really expresses the character's feelings.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very moving poem! It expresses fear and anxiousness...
how we can lose something in such a short time..
Thank you for the piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very touching poem, thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


AND SOMEONE ELSE'S WORLD TOUCHES OURS .. A LITTLE GLIMPSE OF LIVES ..


JASMINE ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


A powerful write reflective of the storm itself...xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is Fantastic, I really enjoyed this.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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