My Five Hours

 

Run,

Race to do as they say.

Every word out of their mouth

Is your command.

Think slowly, get it right

The first time.

But don't actually

Be slow.

Make a mistake

The money's gone.

They're always right.

You're always wrong.

Don't forget that.

 

Don't forget anything.

Author's Note

My poem about work intentionally made overly dramatic.:) Please review.

Reviews

[Adam M. Snow]

Love it

[Audrey Howitt]

I think you have captured the feel of this so well!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I loved the graphic and the precise words, I feel the story, where "they" are personification of certain fear...You are wrong, just in "their" eyes...
nice rhythm!

[pinpen]

I totally loved this write, Simply wonderful

[Chris]

I see hardly anything within this one that is "over"-anything! Pretty damn accurate.