My Five Hours

My Five Hours

A Poem by SilentDreamer

 

Run,

Race to do as they say.

Every word out of their mouth

Is your command.

Think slowly, get it right

The first time.

But don't actually

Be slow.

Make a mistake

The money's gone.

They're always right.

You're always wrong.

Don't forget that.

 

Don't forget anything.

© 2012 SilentDreamer


Author's Note

SilentDreamer
My poem about work intentionally made overly dramatic.:) Please review.

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Love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think you have captured the feel of this so well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I loved the graphic and the precise words, I feel the story, where "they" are personification of certain fear...You are wrong, just in "their" eyes...
nice rhythm!


Posted 7 Years Ago


I totally loved this write, Simply wonderful

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I see hardly anything within this one that is "over"-anything! Pretty damn accurate.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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