A response to the poem that is our life story

A response to the poem that is our life story

A Poem by Ellie Koput
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Recently, I posted a poem on tumblr (lifelessandsober.tumblr.com GO CHECK ME OUT!) One of the first likers was a guy who posts poetry prompts. I thought that it would be really cool to try this.

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Here's the prompt: write a poem from the perspective of someone reading another poem. this poem can be morbid, happy, sad, etc. must include at least one pair of rhyming lines. 
You are a poem,my dear 
With your rhymes
your line breaks 
your lullabies 
I fear
You and I won't adhere. 
so
I read the story of your life 
with my hands 
my teeth 
my eyes 
Too much strife
Put down the f*****g knife 
 before
You slice your composition 
at your wrists 
your hips 
your thighs 
An illusion of confusion
Due to the persecution 
it's as though
My own poem isn't s**t 
my rhymes 
my line breaks 
my lullabies 

Did you even read it? 

© 2014 Ellie Koput


Author's Note

Ellie Koput
This may be kind of inconsistent, but so is life.

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Added on October 13, 2014
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Ellie Koput
Ellie Koput

WI



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Hey, I'm Ellie. I write poetry, persuasions, and short stories. I'm currently a writing major at a high school for performing arts, and I hope this site can allot as a way for me to share my writi.. more..

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