This is so short, simple, and splendid. It makes me want to ride a bike. Unfortunately I don't have one and believe it or not the last time I tried to ride one it turned out I had forgotten how, but I'm inspired. Maybe I'll buy one when I get my check.
This is so short, simple, and splendid. It makes me want to ride a bike. Unfortunately I don't have one and believe it or not the last time I tried to ride one it turned out I had forgotten how, but I'm inspired. Maybe I'll buy one when I get my check.
Wow! This is very interesting in how it doesn't fully rhyme in each stanza, but each stanza contains an "end" and an "in(d)" sound, so in a way the stanzas rhyme with each other. Not only that, they go in a cyclical motion: "in(d)" - "end" - "end" - "in(d)" - "in(d)" - "end". Way! To! Go! The ellipsis on the third lines of each stanza as a bridge into fourth lines is grand! Well done!
Beautiful use of description. I saw the forest and the animals of nature because of the good description. Thank you Ellis for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote