Love

a moment
of love
expands in silence

Reviews

[William Liston]

This is short and sweet, giving a very good description of love. Sometimes, words are better left unsaid. I've always considered silence to be an interesting yet ironic topic for a poem (I say it's ironic because you're using words to describe the lack of words). I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.

- William Liston

[Dave Ellis]

Thank you, William.
Very interesting point as well.. it makes me think or reflect on making longer works about silence..
Or peace.. constructing/establishing/"lowering" moods with words.. into silence and peace..

Thanks again :)

[APOORVA]

wow!
a worth a praise line

[Karmee]

so true, wonderful in such a few words

[Dave Ellis]

Thank you, Kitseth!!
:)

[Karmee]

no problem, have a lovely day :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the best love is the one with the comfortable silences.

j.

[Dave Ellis]

Agreed. And it can feel like a certain timelessness, when it happens.

[Howard Savage]

Short but profound. A true statement, because true love don't need to be embellished,

[Dave Ellis]

Thank you.. And fully agreed. Very well said.