The Moon

The Moon

A Poem by Claire Marie
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This is a metaphor. I'm interested to hear your thoughts on what it's a metaphor for.

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I adore the night sky.

The stars shine in the absence of light,
Looking brilliant without attracting
Too much attention to one or the other.

The water on the earth reflects
The stars back, twinkling oblivious at themselves,
Making the sky seem a vast horizon.

The debris in space
Fly by so fast you can't tell what they are
In a breathtaking rocket facade. 

All of this only serves as a stage
For the most magnificent of the night:
The Moon.

It glows eerily through the thick black
Distance from here to there.

Sometimes white, sometimes yellow,
Sometimes whole, sometimes broken,
Sometimes clear, sometimes hidden

It's always there as a constant,
Reflecting the sunlight
That is harsh during the day
In a low-light glow that is both dim and bright
Enough to be admired. 

Would the sky be so lovely
Without the moon?

Perhaps, Perhaps not. 
I have yet to see a night
Without the moon. 

© 2014 Claire Marie


Author's Note

Claire Marie
I tried varying my stanza and line lengths, and I was wondering if it helped the poem? Feedback is appreciated.

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Added on April 27, 2014
Last Updated on April 27, 2014
Tags: metaphor, moon, sky, night, love, stars, evening, descriptive

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Claire Marie
Claire Marie

Ann Arbor, MI



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I'm a high school student from Michigan, looking to improve and build on my writing. I write short stories, a little poetry, and experimental observations. I hope you enjoy, and I value any constructi.. more..

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