Iron poetry for an Iron Fist

Iron poetry for an Iron Fist

A Poem by elvenom
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A short incantation I made for a particular character of mine. Feels motivational, so I decided to post it here.

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I am energy unbound,
a trait of life unfold, profound,
essence of an ancient spirit,
shadowless, I am judgment, fear it!

Let my rising, splitting echo
wake and stir worlds from slumber,
unknown to fear, nor to doubt
and rise against the dark, aloud.


I am honor, wrapped in wrist,
I am striking iron fist.

© 2014 elvenom


Author's Note

elvenom
Haven't written anything recently so this is an attempt to fill up the hole somehow.

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I love the spirit of your stuff so much. It has a very mysterious eyed ferocity about it, if that makes any sense.. I sometimes ramble. ;). Thank you for sharing with us.
.. Misty

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

5 Years Ago

In that case, I will ramble about your work more often.. ;)
elvenom

5 Years Ago

Be my guest, anytime :)
M. L. F.

5 Years Ago

Ok, deal... ;)
Oh wow, this is so powerful! The rhymes are excellent and the length of the lines is perfect. My favourite lines would be
"Let my rising, splitting echo
wake and stir worlds from slumber,"
I like how you made 'spirit' rhyme with 'fear it'.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

elvenom

7 Years Ago

Thank so much for your kind words, fairest one, it means a lot to me. Since rhymes get less and less.. read more

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Tags: energy, unblund, unfold, essence, spirit, ancient, honor, wrist, fist, iron, echo, slumber, judgment

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elvenom
elvenom

Bulgaria



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elvenom (short for elven venom) is the nickname I'm virtually known with. Just an amateur writer with no published work yet who loves rhymes and writes poems but works on a future book series, too. En.. more..

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