I Gotta Pee

I Gotta Pee

A Poem by CircusNerd
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for my dear best friend, Deepshikha, who suggested i write about how she's feeling at the moment when i asked her for a topic :D

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I'm crossing my legs

Watching the clock

Waiting for the bell

Before people gawk

I'll run out of the room

Not a moment too soon

And run back to my place

Before I'm marked late

I've got my homework out

And pencil in hand

Just waiting for the sound

One sound of command

The seconds tick by

My palms become damp

My breath becomes deep

I'm caught by a clamp

This feeling erupts

It's getting hard to see

Only a few more minutes

But s**t, I gotta pee

© 2009 CircusNerd


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hahah!! so funny! how are you able to turn any subject into a great poem??

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was hilarious. good job. I'm glad some people still think poems can be funny.-justin

Posted 10 Years Ago


hahahaha! I love this! Great poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


haha amazing funny a*s poem. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha... nice write... keep it up... loved the poem cuz its actually true, bad part is... I don't use public restrooms

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is an awesome poem, and love the ending, it was hilarious. I saw the title and just had to read it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


so cute. the title was very catchy! haha. unique. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


I just had to read this for the title alone and I am glad that I did. Ha, I really enjoyed this piece. It had a good rhyming scheme, a very great flow, and it was an entertaining read on top of all that. And yes, we can all relate to this. Never dawned on me to make a poem out of it but you did it and did it very well. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Been there. Very funny, very clever. I hope you made it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


lol! love it!!!! who HASN'T been there? ha ha!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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