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A Poem by unspokenguilt
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I bring my pen to paper

To tell you how I feel

But every word that follows

Fails emphasize that it’s real

I write it in my head

So eloquent

And true

But when we face each other

My lips become confused

I like you is so juvenile

And less then what’s inside

I love you seems so tarnished

And so casually misused

I need you is a bit obsessive

And not exactly true

I want you could sum it up

But frankly sounds so crude

I guess I’m stuck with nothing

But a “Hi!” and “how are you?”

© 2013 unspokenguilt


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unspokenguilt
well at least it's something

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i try to tell you but the words just wont come out
so i wrote this poem just for you,so you`ll know just how much i love you

Posted 5 Years Ago


Better than a slap on the face with a wet fish I s'pose (will that translate, I wonder).


how to review....?
I liked ...no liked is too juvenile
I love....no loved is tarnished
Hi Im Anto - good write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


unspokenguilt

5 Years Ago

likewise ^______^
ANTO

5 Years Ago

wow what big smile you have grandmoth... I mean Elyssa
unspokenguilt

5 Years Ago

The better to...wait a min me >_< old?! Lol!
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Rm
Yeah I think we have all been there:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


unspokenguilt

5 Years Ago

you can say that again :)
"I bring my pen to paper

To tell you how I feel

But every word that follows

Fails emphasize that it’s real"
A beautiful poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


unspokenguilt

6 Years Ago

^__^ Thank you for your review!
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
I love it! It's cute, sweet and so naively innocent. I thought I should mention this, but I think you are gorgeous. Not! I'm just kidding. You are gorgeous. My name is Geon (pronounced Gi-yon). I read your profile and you mentioned that you were an art student? What happened? Why'd you stop?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2013
Last Updated on May 20, 2013
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