left without words

random piece that poped up

I bring my pen to paper

To tell you how I feel

But every word that follows

Fails emphasize that it’s real

I write it in my head

So eloquent

And true

But when we face each other

My lips become confused

I like you is so juvenile

And less then what’s inside

I love you seems so tarnished

And so casually misused

I need you is a bit obsessive

And not exactly true

I want you could sum it up

But frankly sounds so crude

I guess I’m stuck with nothing

But a “Hi!” and “how are you?”

Author's Note

well at least it's something

Reviews

[wordman]

i try to tell you but the words just wont come out
so i wrote this poem just for you,so you`ll know just how much i love you

[ANTO]

Better than a slap on the face with a wet fish I s'pose (will that translate, I wonder).


how to review....?
I liked ...no liked is too juvenile
I love....no loved is tarnished
Hi Im Anto - good write.

[unspokenguilt]

Lmao, thanks for the review! You got a point there...hi Anto, Elyssa here!

[ANTO]

:))........ pleased to meet you Elyssa

[unspokenguilt]

likewise ^______^

[ANTO]

wow what big smile you have grandmoth... I mean Elyssa

[unspokenguilt]

The better to...wait a min me >_< old?! Lol!

[Rm]

Yeah I think we have all been there:)

[unspokenguilt]

you can say that again :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I bring my pen to paper

To tell you how I feel

But every word that follows

Fails emphasize that it’s real"
A beautiful poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

[unspokenguilt]

^__^ Thank you for your review!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Geon Quuin]

I love it! It's cute, sweet and so naively innocent. I thought I should mention this, but I think you are gorgeous. Not! I'm just kidding. You are gorgeous. My name is Geon (pronounced Gi-yon). I read your profile and you mentioned that you were an art student? What happened? Why'd you stop?