Tohrment's rebirth

Tohrment's rebirth

A Story by unspokenguilt
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This is a fan fiction of the Black Dagger Brotherhood. It's a short scene I thought up, I might add to it later...enjoy

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Tohrment stood in the alley, wearing the usual, black t-shirt, his black leather pants, and a pair of shitkickers. He ran his hand over the black daggers sheathed across his chest.

It felt damn good. This was exactly what Tohr needed, He needed to feel useful, and after starving himself for quite some time he was finally getting his strength back. Besides John Mathew and that obnoxious glowing angel fighting lessers was the only thing that kept him going. He couldn’t help but think that if Wellsie could see him now she’d consider his currently behavior as dangerously foolish, but then again these were the white a*s SOBs that were responsible for her death.

Standing over the lesser Tohr felt an odd sense of relief. The male, if it could still be called that, despite the a*s kicking it had just had wasn’t dead but unconscious. Sending it back to where it came from, however temporary it was, it would be therapeutic for him. Tohr unsheathed his dagger and admired how it shined blue even in the dim lights. With one quick thrust in the chest of that lesser would go bouncing back to the Omega.

Just as Tohr was going to waste him a scream cut through the air and Tohr was pushed back as a girl flung herself upon the lesser. Tohr was stunned for a moment. How the hell had this human girl gotten passed the mhis?

“Stay away from my brother!”

Now this was a new one, Tohr thought…never before in the history of the brotherhood fighting the lessers had a human held a connection to a lesser. After all lessers were de-souled humans who had cut all ties to the human world. Judging by the loss of eye pigment and hair color this particular lesser wasn’t a new initiate, so how could she be sure he was whoever she thought he was?

Considering the delicate situation he figured the best thing to do would be to call for backup. Phury and the rest of the boys had to be somewhere near. As he made the call he didn’t take his eyes off the girl. “Yeah, P…we got a problem.”

“Damn straight we got a problem!” she spat. She stood up, grabbing hold of the lesser as she did so.

Tohr couldn’t help but grin. She was such a small woman, but man did she have a mouth on her. “How can you be sure that this lesser is your brother, and not one of the others I’ve already killed?” he questioned.

“A sister knows!” when she let out a gasp Tohr didn’t have to turn around to know that the cavalry had arrived.

Phury greeted Tohr with a “how the hell?” and Vishous chimed in with a “that’s what I’d like to know, true”

“She thinks he’s her brother and-”

“I know he is!” she glared at the three men with pure hatred. With one quick move the lesser was up and behind her, a knife pressed to her throat.

“Awe…sibling rivalry at its finest” V gloated.

 The girl winced as the lesser pressed the blade in deeper. Tohr was willing to bet he would make a run for it. “I have no sister…” he smirked throwing the girl against the brick wall and turning to run.

Vishous chased after him, while Tohr and Phury stayed back to see what they could do about the lesser’s human tag along. Tohr walked up to the unconscious human, and turned to Phury “Do her a favor and erase any ties she thinks she might have with that lesser.  Phury kneeled beside the girl a nudged her arm.

When her eyes opened she was staring at the man with the multicolored hair. He was talking to her but she couldn’t make sense of what he was saying, she couldn’t take her mind away from his piercing yellow eyes…that couldn’t be natural, she thought. “Focus…” he whispered. Phury tried to dive into her mind, but something blocked him from getting into her memories. The female reached out and grasped his hair and then drifted off to sleep. Phury he turned to Tohr and frowned, “that’s odd…I can’t get through!”

“Well if we can’t even erase ourselves from her memory, the only other option would be to bring her along.” Tohr knelt down, picked up the girl from the ground and headed over to the SUV.  Phury opened the door to the back seat “the kings not going to be happy about this” he said running around to the driver’s seat.  Tohr slid the girl in and inserted himself underneath her head. Vishous appeared in the passenger seat his arrival announced by the sweet smell of lessor’s blood. Although he knew the answer Tohr found himself wording the question “the lessor?”

“Taken care of” Vishous smiled, his fangs gleaming.

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© 2011 unspokenguilt


Author's Note

unspokenguilt
ignore any grammar issues
charcter's belong to JR WARD
feedback apreciated



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Interesting. I would love to see where this goes. May I ask what you are planning on making the characters? What I mean by that is what personalities? Character development? Is this lass going to have a major impact on them? Like I said, I'm interested in seeing where this goes! Onward!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


unspokenguilt

11 Years Ago

First of all thank you for the review! As for this piece of work it is only a fan fiction, of The Pa.. read more
wagonburner

11 Years Ago

Bah! No worries! But I think you could really have fun with this has a background arc. Have it to.. read more
wagonburner

11 Years Ago

as, not has, by the way

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