The End

The End

Words flying at me from every direction

Splashing my emotions and twisting them about

I’m chocking on my tears

Will my anguishes ever subside?

Ignorance is bliss until the world falls at your feet,

And you don’t have a home to live in

You don’t have a friend to lean on

If only

To many if only’s to stumble upon

To many missed opportunities to dwell on

What have we come to?

Lying and cheating to get ahead

So much you almost wish you were dead

And one day when those sad words come

You wish you had never even become. 

 

Author's Note

I am 14 and i want to be a novelist someday, but i also enjoy writing poetry so tell me what you think

Reviews

[Onyx Sky]

This is very interesting. When a lot of hurtful words are said to me, I've realized they kind of circle around in my head like you've described here. Would lik to see more of ur work

[Saturnalia]

Wonderful and emotional. You can use this poem as a for a novel you want to write. I've found poems work well with novels; you can twist them and form a plot using their words and ideas. Aside from a spelling error and a few grammatical errors, the concept is well and true.

[Wildecat]

I like this and if you want to be a Novelist then pursue your dream.

[Hannah Olivia]

This poem is nice :3
Everytime I give feedback for a poem, I usually start out saying "Im not one for poetry..." but I grew into it, and I can honestly say i liked it.

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Will my anguishes ever subside?
Ignorance is bliss until the world falls at your feet,
And you don't have a home to live in
You don't have a friend to lean on

THESE ARE SUCH TRUTHFUL WORDS HERE, THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WRITE, KEEP ON WRITING....AMANDA