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A Poem by Emaan Zahra Ijaz
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People, especially the evolving youth, are facing depression, anxiety and lack self-confidence in doing things.The haiku tries to speak to the heart of those in pain and hopes to better their thinking

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This strong heart believes.

Luminous spirit lives,

A goal after the storm.

© 2019 Emaan Zahra Ijaz


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Actually i like it . Just that word goal sounds to me too plain. I will be prefer more words like a spark or hope. But otherwise it' great positive thought.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Emaan Zahra Ijaz

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the review, let me see if i can edit it..

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Added on November 11, 2019
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Emaan Zahra Ijaz
Emaan Zahra Ijaz

Sharjah, Other, United Arab Emirates



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I'm Emaan Zahra Ijaz, a high school student doing her final years of IGCSE.I have a passion for writing, learning and researching as well as reading of course. I like to think of myself as an honest .. more..

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