Choices

Choices

A Poem by Emily W

You find yourself in a twister,
Spinning and spinning around.
So many decisions to make,
If you want to touch the ground.

Time to rethink your big plan.
Faster and faster it gets,
Will you have fun or crash?
There will be no safety nets.

You're moving to the top,
Higher and higher you go.
Is this good or bad?
There's only you who will know.

Over the top you fly,
Falling and falling to land.
This is the end of the ride,
Maybe you'd like a hand?

© 2013 Emily W


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Appreciate the inspirational,motivational and instructional piece.
Its rhymes are also wonderful.
Its special beauty lies in using structures like:Spinning and spinning,Faster and faster,Higher and higher and Falling and falling in second like of each stanza.
It shows that you really worked attentively to construct the poem.
Congratulations,again.!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I got my answer.
You are a real talent indeed.:)
Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that does mean a lot to me :)
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome,talented poet.:)



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Oh so good, kinda inspirational too. Love this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. Made me think of risk taking and possibilities. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This hits hard... literally... as the reader takes in the words... people are not incline to get help, until the problem gets to a point of no return... and when they do finally get the help do they start to realize what life is all about again... or turn back to the person they were all over...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily W

10 Years Ago

You are so true, it shouldn't have to be so hard to ask for help as soon as we need it. Thanks again.. read more
I really like this poem. It draws on the stressful demands of decision making, particularly when deciding on the excitement of short term versus the consequences in the long term. But what I like most about this poem is the hope with which it ends. That last question is so hopeful and presents a helping hand to those in need. Thank you for writing and sharing this poem with us!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you, your review means a lot :). I wasn't sure how people would react to my work but when I he.. read more
Karen

10 Years Ago

Poetry is a beautiful means of expression and those who appreciate all different kinds of poetry get.. read more
Appreciate the inspirational,motivational and instructional piece.
Its rhymes are also wonderful.
Its special beauty lies in using structures like:Spinning and spinning,Faster and faster,Higher and higher and Falling and falling in second like of each stanza.
It shows that you really worked attentively to construct the poem.
Congratulations,again.!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

10 Years Ago

I got my answer.
You are a real talent indeed.:)
Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, that does mean a lot to me :)
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome,talented poet.:)
Nice rhyming. After reading this,I can't help but think of one who works at the stock market and the frenzy that takes place there. I suppose there's a bit of that in anything we take a risk on. We all need someone to help us out now and then.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily W

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I like the idea of the stock market too, I hadn't thought of it like that before :)
Relic

10 Years Ago

You're welcome Emily. Welcome to WC.

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Added on August 6, 2013
Last Updated on August 9, 2013
Tags: life, poetry, choice

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Emily W
Emily W

United Kingdom



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