Desire

Solitary. Quiet Moments

Right Now

I need to just get away

From everything

From the desk, PC, and phones

From you and me, and anyone who cares

Who should?

Who will?

I will love to be by the trees

Where there is gentle breeze

And by fall I stroll home

Take a glass of wine

Seat by the fire

Only with this desire

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

especially for the introverts of the world...solitude is necessary for life...we rest, rejuvenate, rekindle our fires for discovery ... the straight forward, simple language gives me that feeling of solitude in itself... so for me... i say .. well done! thanks for sharing such an intimate moment with poetry
E.
ps. i am a tree hugger too! ;)

[Mirror]

:-) thanks much much Einstein!!! You have said it all. I love it when you said "we rest, rejuvenate, rekindle our fires for discovery ..." Thank you

[Paul Bell]

Yeah, sometimes you've got to get away to reassess your life. Sometimes it works. Sometimes not.
Sometimes the bottle of wine does it too.

[Mirror]

Ah! love the last sentence!!! Crowns it all. Thank you Paul!

[Paul Bell]

Drink. It should be legalised. lol

[Mirror]

lolzzzzzz. That's the thing.

[Mrudula Rani]

If we could have those desired moments and hold the the peace and tranquility they fill our hearts, life is a bliss! Loved your longing for solitude !

[Mirror]

sure Rani, but i steal out time for it.... thank you for your kind review.

[barleygirl]

You are singing my song here, my friend. I often unplug my phone over the weekend, becuz I just can't take any extraneous noise in my life! You've done a great job of using vivid details to show us, first the noisy life, & then the quiet solitude. Too bad more people cannot unplug from the chaos! *sigh!* Fondly, Margie

[Mirror]

Ah, dear. I do so often too. it is obvious how phones control our lives, especially unwanted calls!!!! Thanks for stopping by, Marg.

[Matthew Kult]

Simply Decompressing

Great Read

Matthew

[Mirror]

Thank you so much Matt.

[Matthew Kult]

You are welcome

Matthew

[Haneefah]

Nice Piece Mirror.
Nature seems to be our only comfort when the world gets us mad.

[Mirror]

Thank you Hanee....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Lovely sentiment set out in a delicious piece dear Mirror

[Mirror]

Thank you John my dearest.....

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I think everyone has a chamber in their hearts set aside for solitude. Sometimes in this fast paced world we need those little moments where we can detach ourselves from the stresses of life and just revel in nature and ponder. And as writers and poets, it is in these moments of solitude that our muse is awakened.

Lovely write, Mirror. Very reflective and ponderous.

[Mirror]

Thank you Doodly, your review really connects to my thoughts.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I love being in the hands of nature. Forest, water or mountain. Places for us to gather our mind and thoughts. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Mirror]

Thank you, Coyote. I appreciate the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.