I Thought

Its about love, and how it hurts.

I thought you loved me

I thought you cared

But now I'm just siting here

All alown and scared

You said that i was your all

You said I was you only

You told me you'd never leave me

Never leave me lonly

So now I'm standing here

 Crying and shaking

 It must be the fear

Its tearing me up

Now I'm braking

Just whating for you

To come rescue me again

Please comeback

I don't remember how long It's been

Author's Note

It's sad

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Heartbreakingly sorrowful words, beautifully written

[Abbie]

wow emily this is really but you showed this to me before at skewl but really good a few spelling mistakes but really amazing

[Caitlynxoxo]

A few spelling mistakes, but I never care about those much in my own so I'm not going to bother pointing them out to you :) I like to focus on the poem more, myself. And yours was very saddening, but a great write. It had feeling, and protrayed hurt through a few short lines. It was short, but enjoyable, and touching. Thanks for sharing!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Deathangel]

Very good write. .