Say

You're in my dreams

You're in my head

You're in my thoughts

When I lay in my bed

You're always there

Even when you're not

People may think different

But hey, that's my thought

When you look into my eyes they melt

When I look into your eyes you don't know what to say

You say all this nice stuff about me

But I think it's just the you felt.

I just don't know what to do

I think about you everyday

It's really not that confusing

But say hey, i love you

 

 

Author's Note

The line "When I look into you eyes you don't know what to say" Is correct.

Reviews

[!Scream_Kyle_Scream!]

awww i really like this emily.. its similar to the one that you reviewed for me. it was very cute :) keep up the good work. :D

[Elvina CZq]

I remember your previous title is 'Say 'Hey, I love you!''.. well, yes, once I read that title, the song by Michael Franti just couldn't stop playing in my head. So yea, I turned that song on while reading your poem. :) Nicely written. Short and sweet and cute :)

[[<3~*~ButterflyXxXKisse..]

Yeah I agree with Tiff, great job I erally like this :)

[Nicole]

Lol, this is cute. xD
I really like it.. :D
But.. I think you messed up?
"When I look into your eyes you don't know what to say"
Was it supposed to be:
"When I look into your eyes I don't know what to say"?
I don't know.. I'm just observing.
BUT! I Love This. :D
100% Rated.

[Tiff-AH!-knee�]

shawtys like a melody in my head. i can hear that from over here lol


good job emily.