Cracked Chair

Cracked Chair

A Poem by Emily
"

Never knowing...

"

Sitting in a cracked

Up chair


Never know when

I am free


Sitting with these chains

Who knows who else has been in these


Being free

Feels just a

Dream.

© 2015 Emily


Author's Note

Emily
Hope you liked it!!

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Another good read. Thank you for sharing your work Emily! Surely, my wheels of imagination have set in to motion. I see the cracked up chair symbolically as a place where there's no growth, no progress, no opportunities of moving forward. Good one! Have a nice day ahead! :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thanks Lavender!!
Lavender Soya

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. :-)



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I really loved reading this, the last stanza is so sad but beautifully written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thanks Amanda!!
The last stanza sums it all up, what a great piece of poetry you have here!
Awesome job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Lizardo

6 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Short and meaningful! I like your style lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thanks Cool Girl!!
Cool Girl

6 Years Ago

Youre welcome!
Imagery is beautiful.

Your diction makes it even better.

Good read. x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thank you Jessica!
Great write emily, enjoyed it as usual, your style is definitive.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thanks Roshan!!
I like the idea of not knowing if you are free and wondering who else has worn these chairs, experienced these same traumas perhaps. An interesting thought. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!
This reminded me of an old rocking chair my siblings and I had as children. There's a slat missing, but my mother still has it in her possession.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Glad you liked it!!
Just the idea of a cracked up chair brings a flood of images to my mind... that yours found its way to chains is intriguing. I wonder what lies between the chair, whole and unused, and the broken chair with its chains. My imagination weeps with the possibilities. A great poem to make one think, Emily! Thanks for sharing...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thanks that means a lot!
I like it maybe it describes how physical writers feel when they sit on their desks.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emily

6 Years Ago

Thank you!!

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Added on February 18, 2015
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Tags: Cracked, Crack, scared, worried, dream, stuck, free, poetry, emily

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Emily
Emily

Fergus Falls, MN



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