Sun Water

This is a poem I wrote a while back, I've posted this on another website too:)

Breath be fast, breath be gentle.

Wind be cold, wind be loud.

Rage be burst, mind be mental.

Suffering be in thunderous sound.

Heart be locked, the broken key.

Let me go, set me free.

Open the shears, let sun shine here.

Can’t you feel it? The warmth so near?

Open my eyes to a world without lies.

Give me a place where love never dies.

Make me smile, make breathing worthwhile.

Be patient with me, like a small child.

Pick up the pieces, don’t leave me still shattered.

Give me happiness, life’s issues  no matter.

Reviews

[Belinda]

I like this. I could almost use these words as a prayer. good read.

[Emma Marie Taylor]

Thanks so much!