Lips Of Blood Poison

Night time stars fall against the tree
Shadowing the horror of the monster, me
Closing my eyes I cut skin neatly
Soaking up blood so, so discreetly
He needed to die, the man of that hour
His words hurt, he was so sour
I dragged him here, with promise of kiss
But instead he got my deadly lips
Injecting my mouth with dark blood poison
Tasting the sweet syrup of bloody night crimson
Dark smiles pulled at my blood thirsty lips
As I dismembered his body, twelve even splits
Judge me not, for this man is a monster
He murdered my brother, my mother, my father
So tonight as the black ravens squack and titter
I kill this man on the night of midwinter
Hanging his limbs from the branches of trees
I tie parts together into ones, twos, and threes
As I knot the last part, his bloody red skull
I walk over to him and gently I pull
And with stained guilty lips
I brush his cold, dead mouth
With a poisonous kiss

Reviews

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

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[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Myself and two other people helping me choose from submitted poems, decide to include this piece it very good for one of your age. We also wanted poems from the whole spectrum of people on Writers Cafe young and old alike. So well done.

[Mary]

Emma Marie, what an amazing write... creepy, horrifying, poisonous, bloody, musical and passionate! the rhythm is such that I can almost see those dead limbs swinging.

[lothlorienwriter]

Gruesome piece I too have been lured by many a poisonous kiss.......but have lived to tell the tale......till now!

[PublishingAgent]

Chopped up in twelves pieces ARGHHHHHHHHHH!!! Great poem....tastily grim!!!

[Belinda]

Wow. This is hauntingly pretty. I don't know where the idea of this poem came from but it is a great write.

[Emma Marie Taylor]

lol I was reading Edgar Allan Poe and it brought out the dark writing in me:) Thank you!

[The Fallen]

Amazing poem, Like I mean It was ABSOLUTLY amazing I loved every single word. It was a wonderful write

[Emma Marie Taylor]

Omg! Thanks so much Olivia!

[The Fallen]

Your welcome

[Invictus]

Absolutely beautiful, one of the greatest poems I have ever read. And very rare is it for me to enjoy a poem, but this, this is superb in every sense of the word.

[Emma Marie Taylor]

Thank you!

[~L.A.]

0-0 shocking something like this would come from your mind. Anyway, wonderful write, *rubs back of neck* Hope this doesn't give me nightmares.

[Emma Marie Taylor]

lol...sorry! And yeah, I have no idea where it came from, I just started writing and ended up with this...