Who Are You?

Who Are You?

A Poem by Emma Marie Taylor

                 Who are You? 
    
Maybe I'm just scared
Maybe I'm just paranoid
Maybe its not there

But the fear I feel 
The heart I heal 
Doesn't seem to be there 

You still smile when I laugh 
You still feel like my perfect half
You still think of our hazy past

But the look of love you've lost
You're eyes now hard, not sweet and soft
I don't know who you are anymore
I can't tell what you are fighting for

You look like you
But you arent acting true
Where are you? 
I wish I knew 

Your words are hollow 
Broken
Shallow 

Your secrets locked 
Your heart is blocked 
You say you love me
But I can't tell
I cant see 
 You love me

I dread the moment
When I know
And 
And finally have to

Let you go

© 2013 Emma Marie Taylor


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My fav. lines're
Your secrets locked
Your heart is blocked
You say you love me
But I can't tell
I cant see
You love me...

I loved and did favorite those lines, cuz, i can see the depth of love with your RHYMING way like you're expressing yurself by singing a song in few lines... Once again an awesome write you written... Keep writing's only the way to raise your awesome skills in this field.

your writes're good and powerful. You've well questioned here from yourself by using "MAY BE"... great write, i'm really flatted by this piece. A systematic way i've been made reading your stuffs line by line cuz, they're all very nice and just written Right from the bottom of your Heart... and by your Scented Hands... Now you've got this 100/100 :)

Posted 6 Years Ago





I dread the moment

When I know

And

And finally have to




Let you go.
My faves in this nice well written poem...

Posted 6 Years Ago


So sad...

Yet there is that sort of release at the end. Letting go of the heart-breaker is like letting go of your pain. Actually, it is. ^^

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very powerful poem and message. Sometimes the only thing we can do in life is to let go of all of the things that are burdening us.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on January 8, 2013
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Emma Marie Taylor
Emma Marie Taylor

Muncie, IN



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I am fifteen years old. I am a sophomore in high school, and writing is my passion. I love poetry, books, novellas, short stories, limericks, lyrics, stories, journals, blogs, chapters, etc. I lov.. more..

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