Who Are You?

                 Who are You? 

    

Maybe I'm just scared

Maybe I'm just paranoid

Maybe its not there

But the fear I feel 

The heart I heal 

Doesn't seem to be there 

You still smile when I laugh 

You still feel like my perfect half

You still think of our hazy past

But the look of love you've lost

You're eyes now hard, not sweet and soft

I don't know who you are anymore

I can't tell what you are fighting for

You look like you

But you arent acting true

Where are you? 

I wish I knew 

Your words are hollow 

Broken

Shallow 

Your secrets locked 

Your heart is blocked 

You say you love me

But I can't tell

I cant see 

 You love me

I dread the moment

When I know

And 

And finally have to

Let you go

Author's Note

Favorite line? Thanks for reading! Please review!

Reviews

[Rahul]

My fav. lines're
Your secrets locked
Your heart is blocked
You say you love me
But I can't tell
I cant see
You love me...

I loved and did favorite those lines, cuz, i can see the depth of love with your RHYMING way like you're expressing yurself by singing a song in few lines... Once again an awesome write you written... Keep writing's only the way to raise your awesome skills in this field.

your writes're good and powerful. You've well questioned here from yourself by using "MAY BE"... great write, i'm really flatted by this piece. A systematic way i've been made reading your stuffs line by line cuz, they're all very nice and just written Right from the bottom of your Heart... and by your Scented Hands... Now you've got this 100/100 :)

[Sami Khalil]

I dread the moment

When I know

And

And finally have to




Let you go.
My faves in this nice well written poem...

[Felicity's Eve]

So sad...

Yet there is that sort of release at the end. Letting go of the heart-breaker is like letting go of your pain. Actually, it is. ^^

[Ahmad Cox]

Very powerful poem and message. Sometimes the only thing we can do in life is to let go of all of the things that are burdening us.