Playing Games **Not Done**

This is my lyrics to a new song that im working on. Tell me what ya think

Thought it was love in the begining 

Thought you were all mine

and I didnt think it would be

sucha short time.

I knew this wasnt real,

I just didnt wanna believe.

And everytime I saw you, 

you'd just leave.

Now i know that fist kiss 

meant nothing at all.

There were moments 

when we had something.

And we never stopped loving 

You and I just werent good, 

cuz we never understood 

why it had to be this way. 

Every part of my life is

just crazy and I know that

you were never there for me.

 

ohoh 

Somethings just killing me 

I know that we could never be

Theres just something in my head

telling me what i should have said.

But you just like to play games

**not finished**

Reviews

[Lighthouse Call]

Interesting piece. I like the background idea of it. Its hard for the reader to determine anything about the songs' structure (bridge, chorus..etc)
I assumed ohoh was of kind of a stop to the chorus, sudden breakdown.
Flow was alright, I'm sure it will be better once it's finished.
Can't wait to read the complete version. I think this can develop in a very good song :)