Starfuckers

Starfuckers

A Poem by SLOVA
"

About my anxiety. I believe in no god.

"
Honey, I'm done for the day
You can take a break on me
Honey, I'm sorry I'm late
You can take a break on me

I've got too much on my mind
To be fine, spare me
I've got troubled thoughts
And a whole night just to think

'Cause we're starfuckers
Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get
us
up
to
them heavens

Honey, I've got my ways
So don't take this out on me
Honey, I'm sickening prayers
Don't ask who god is to me

I've got too much on my mind
To be fine, spare me
I've got troubled thoughts
And a whole night just to think

'Cause we're starfuckers
Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get
us
up
to
them heavens

God help me through
God help me through
God help me through
I cannot see

God help me through
God help me through
God help me through
I cannot see

You are blinding
You are blinding
You are blinding
You are blinding

You are blinding
You are blinding
You are blinding
I cannot see

We're starfuckers
Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get 
us 
up 
to 
them

Starfuckers
Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get 
us 
up 
to 
them heavens

© 2014 SLOVA


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I really like this! This captures the emotion of anxiety in such a surreal, experimental way. I think the whole concept of "starfuckers" that you've created gives an unfamiliar edge to a very familiar feeling. I also like your use of repetition. This is extremely impressive; well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SLOVA

6 Years Ago

Bella,

Thank you for your kind words. Struggling with anxiety already gives the individ.. read more



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I liked this poem. Title scared me and words impressed me.
We're starfuckers
"Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get
us
up
to
them"
I truly enjoyed the poetry. Alive and entertaining words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Fun lyrics, thanks for sharing. keep writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago


a powerful and raw write! well done! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


It kinda reminds me of a Nine Inch Nails song. I like it!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


First of all, bravo on an amazing piece! You mention in the description that this is about your anxiety and believing in "no god" so I read it through that lens. I re-read it a few more times without considering your description and find it to be wonderfully open to interpretation in so many different ways.

Again, very, nicely, done. :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SLOVA

6 Years Ago

I love that you've seen it through both perspectives. Thanks for your kind words, Paradox.
My God is nonjudgemental and everywhere...I love reading your work!! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really like this! This captures the emotion of anxiety in such a surreal, experimental way. I think the whole concept of "starfuckers" that you've created gives an unfamiliar edge to a very familiar feeling. I also like your use of repetition. This is extremely impressive; well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SLOVA

6 Years Ago

Bella,

Thank you for your kind words. Struggling with anxiety already gives the individ.. read more
I like this poem it is very cool, good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the meaning!
It's a good sized poem for a meaning like this.
Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


SLOVA

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Emily. I appreciate your kind words and support.

SLOVA

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Added on November 16, 2014
Last Updated on November 21, 2014
Tags: anxiety, nervousness, poetry, poem, star, starfucker

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