Starfuckers

About my anxiety. I believe in no god.

Honey, I'm done for the day

You can take a break on me

Honey, I'm sorry I'm late

You can take a break on me

I've got too much on my mind

To be fine, spare me

I've got troubled thoughts

And a whole night just to think

'Cause we're starfuckers

Trying to get some yeah

Helium to get

us

up

to

them heavens

Honey, I've got my ways

So don't take this out on me

Honey, I'm sickening prayers

Don't ask who god is to me

I've got too much on my mind

To be fine, spare me

I've got troubled thoughts

And a whole night just to think

'Cause we're starfuckers

Trying to get some yeah

Helium to get

us

up

to

them heavens

God help me through

God help me through

God help me through

I cannot see

God help me through

God help me through

God help me through

I cannot see

You are blinding

You are blinding

You are blinding

You are blinding

You are blinding

You are blinding

You are blinding

I cannot see

We're starfuckers

Trying to get some yeah

Helium to get 

us 

up 

to 

them

Starfuckers

Trying to get some yeah

Helium to get 

us 

up 

to 

them heavens

Reviews

[Belle]

I really like this! This captures the emotion of anxiety in such a surreal, experimental way. I think the whole concept of "starfuckers" that you've created gives an unfamiliar edge to a very familiar feeling. I also like your use of repetition. This is extremely impressive; well done!

[SLOVA]

Bella,

Thank you for your kind words. Struggling with anxiety already gives the individual such a surreal feeling, the process of ridding yourself of it gives you a frightening sort of high that I tried to portray as accurately as I could. I appreciate your thrill, I really do.

SLOVA

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem. Title scared me and words impressed me.
We're starfuckers
"Trying to get some yeah
Helium to get
us
up
to
them"
I truly enjoyed the poetry. Alive and entertaining words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[PoeticChico]

Fun lyrics, thanks for sharing. keep writing!

[Indra Neil]

a powerful and raw write! well done! :)

[marcus]

It kinda reminds me of a Nine Inch Nails song. I like it!!

[Paradox]

First of all, bravo on an amazing piece! You mention in the description that this is about your anxiety and believing in "no god" so I read it through that lens. I re-read it a few more times without considering your description and find it to be wonderfully open to interpretation in so many different ways.

Again, very, nicely, done. :-)

[SLOVA]

I love that you've seen it through both perspectives. Thanks for your kind words, Paradox.

[terry smith]

My God is nonjudgemental and everywhere...I love reading your work!! :)

[Bella]

I like this poem it is very cool, good job.

[Emily]

I love the meaning!
It's a good sized poem for a meaning like this.
Keep it up!

[SLOVA]

Thank you, Emily. I appreciate your kind words and support.

SLOVA