A Song

Something's wrong

I don't think we're getting on

Some kind of sad phenomenon

Am I the only one

worried

We're twenty-one

Your apartment's in the upper echelon

Lately you move like an automaton

What's going on

tell me

In my darkest hour I think of you

With nothing but your eyes to get me through

I'm bottomed out, what else can I do

To keep something I know I'm about to lose

You seem fine

There's nothing going through your mind

But I don't remember the last time you smiled

It's been a while

Sorry

Have some wine

A different person's sober so it's fine

Only drunken lovers I can call mine

Maybe given time

You'll love me

In my darkest hour I think of you

With nothing but your eyes to get me through

I'm bottomed out, what else can I do

To keep something I know I'm about to lose

Will you love me if I stay the same

I try my hardest but I don't think I can change

Let me try to make things better, okay

I don't think I could take it if you went away

We can go back to the basics

Picking up your Newports at gas stations

I wait in the bowels of my lover's patience

We can go back to the basics

Picking up your Newports at gas stations

I wait in the bowels of my lover's patience

In my darkest hour I think of you

With nothing but your eyes to get me through

I'm bottomed out, what else can I do

To keep something I know I'm about to lose

Will you love me if I stay the same

I try my hardest but I don't think I can change

Let me try to make things better, okay

I'll do anything to make you stay

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and strong emotions for love in the poetry.
"Will you love me if I stay the same
I try my hardest but I don't think I can change
Let me try to make things better, okay
I'll do anything to make you stay"
When love fall apart. Last wish is wish and a prayer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[zaisham9393]

This is so cute and sad !
I loved it!
Thank you for sharing :)!