LET ME STAY

cuz you inspire me...

Where my love drifts to beyond its height

Aspirations are touched upon without wish

Where findings are found within sight

Embraced and protected through the complexity of what exists

Into the kneeling golden rays of infinity

Into the indigo stained nowhere of serenity

As far as I can go

Let me stay- 

Author's Note

a simple piece, with a simple purpose... = )

((thank you Aaron for the beautiful view!!!))

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and ANGUISH..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

[Megan Simpson]

Very nice, I enjoyed reading it and will definitely check out your other writing. Excellent work!

[Faraway Sado]

Emphasis, its very wrong of you to say that its simple because each and everyone of its word every time stopped the biscuit in my hand to pass through the threshold of my lips. Good Job!!!!

[André-J-Franklin]

This poem is as beautiful as the sun rising in the picture. This poem is my read of the day. Its so brilliant yet simple.
keep the art of your words flowing!

[Lady of the Ring]

Simple yet elegant. Touching, truly touching. I loved this it is amazing. Keep up the great work. You have amazing potential for publication.

[Christina]

This is such a simple yet beautiful poem. I love the expansive nature of this poem, it slowly creates layers upon layers of distance and then softly resolves with the last two lines of the poem, "As far as I can go, let me stay". The idea of stretching to your limits for love is a reality I can certainly identify with and your words express this idea so vividly.

Thank you for sharing.

[Antonio Valentino]

making something sound simple is the genius in writing..

pretty wonderful, glad i got to read this tonight..

:)

[Echo Nightfield]

Simple, to the point and puts a smile on the reader's face. Thank you. I adore it.

[EMMIE]

You put a smile on my face with this one and I looooove the sky in the pic =D

[stars are far]

So simple yet sweet and cute.
Great work :)