Forever Gone

~dedicated to my aunt whom is now gone, I love you~

When you left the world it felt like time froze,
Like ash falling on a rose.

You left the world without a goodbye,
You now speak silent words that only make me want to cry.

Your heart stopped like a beautiful drum,
A beautiful heart no longer able to run.

A beautiful face we are no longer seeing,
I cry just thinking of the feeling.

I wish I could hug you one more time,
Saying how much I love you before goodbye.

I'm always so loud around others,
But when I think of you and how empty I feel, I just stutter.

Reviews

[Ashleigh Brand]

So much emotion and I love it! :,).

[Ashley]

Thank you :)

[Sir_Ix]

What jack said, once again I read it twice and let it sink in, you do sure capture what you are getting across!!

[Jack Kennedy]

Very deep poem. It kind grabbed my attention from the title and the poem didn't disappoint! Very well done

[Ashley]

Thank you so much! Really appreciate it.

[Jack Kennedy]

You're welcome!!