Forever Gone

Forever Gone

A Poem by Ashley
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~dedicated to my aunt whom is now gone, I love you~

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When you left the world it felt like time froze,
Like ash falling on a rose.

You left the world without a goodbye,
You now speak silent words that only make me want to cry.

Your heart stopped like a beautiful drum,
A beautiful heart no longer able to run.

A beautiful face we are no longer seeing,
I cry just thinking of the feeling.

I wish I could hug you one more time,
Saying how much I love you before goodbye.

I'm always so loud around others,
But when I think of you and how empty I feel, I just stutter.

© 2014 Ashley


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So much emotion and I love it! :,).

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
What jack said, once again I read it twice and let it sink in, you do sure capture what you are getting across!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very deep poem. It kind grabbed my attention from the title and the poem didn't disappoint! Very well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Really appreciate it.
Jack Kennedy

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!!

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Added on May 18, 2014
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