Open Road

Open Road

A Story by Ashley

The open road longed for me and I longed for it.  Nothing felt more sincere and right; traveling along the gentle river with the sound of music filling the car.  The trees blanketed onto the endless mountains and it was not until that day I realized I was home.  My heart belonged to the forest and mountains with nothing else in the world to care for.  The sun beamed throughout the car and the crisp autumn breeze filled my lungs.  Nature welcome me into its safety and I let go of everything.  Focusing only on the way the trees curved along the road, the sounds, and life filling around me.  At this moment I was in oblivion, I was free.

© 2014 Ashley

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Your writing is absolutely brilliant! I can really visualize throughout the read. Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very nice to read, so much I read it twice. Your wordplay paints a nice picture of what you wrote, keep writing!! You can only get better from here.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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7 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm not used to writing good to paint a visual picture, glad you enjoyed it tho. :)
You are so right.:)I like going somewhere without even purpose sometimes, too.
Especially, i long for going to the airport by the car, when you feel free from your job and problems, feel free to think some crazy thoughts, feel that your cloths are going warmer and everything is going make you happy;))

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on May 18, 2014
Last Updated on May 18, 2014
Tags: adventure, open road, nature, forest, mountains, short, story, random, life, freedom, love, happy, new, outdoors, dream




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