My Dream

My Dream

A Poem by Ashley
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If only there was a better world we lived in

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Moving away to a better place,
Where there are no worries and you feel safe.

A place like that I've only dreamed of,
Filled with peace and love.

But it finally came true like nothing I imagined,
And I became saddened.

So I began my dream once more,
My dream hopefully one day to come ashore.

© 2014 Ashley


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Awesome poem and great use of the rhymes. We all wish we could find a place like the one you speak of in the poem but it's so hard to find. Finding it in your dreams is easy, it's finding it in reality that's nigh impossible. Still a great poem though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Yes I it sucks that dreams are better than reality. Thank you for the comment! :)
FireFox9

7 Years Ago

Read my poem Dreams to Reality and you'll realize how ironic that statement is.



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Lovely poem Ashley- my favourite line was the last line, "My dream hopefully one day to come ashore". It reminded me of the ocean and the waves...

Well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this! I thought it was serene in a sad way, and it just truly showed the emotions you were trying to express. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
nicely written. I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Great poem and keeping dreaming it's the best thing one can do

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Thanks :) and yes indeed.
Awesome poem and great use of the rhymes. We all wish we could find a place like the one you speak of in the poem but it's so hard to find. Finding it in your dreams is easy, it's finding it in reality that's nigh impossible. Still a great poem though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashley

7 Years Ago

Yes I it sucks that dreams are better than reality. Thank you for the comment! :)
FireFox9

7 Years Ago

Read my poem Dreams to Reality and you'll realize how ironic that statement is.

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