Wrong.

Wrong.

A Poem by Mily

So many things have gone wrong lately.

I feel like I'm drowning and everyone can see me.

But, nobody is doing anything to help..

 

I feel like every move I make..

I feel as if all I'm doing is setting myself up for sadness.

It's like it's raining over me,

but there's sunlight on everyone else.

And I can see them.

But it just wont stop raining on me.

 

Sometimes,

when I think about all I've done,

or all that's been done to me,

I cannot breath.

I have trouble.

I feel like I'm suffocating. 

Like there is something in my chest.

Like my sadness has taken over.

 

Like a fish out of water.

 

 

 

 

 

© 2014 Mily


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"Sometimes, / when I think about all I've done, / or all that's been done to me, / I cannot breath."

I can relate. Keep writing, and keep your head up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"So many things have gone wrong lately.

I feel like I'm drowning and everyone can see me.

But, nobody is doing anything to help.."

Humans are very flexible and adaptable...Things will work out eventually...A splendid read and write...:)........

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mily

6 Years Ago

Thank you, it really means a lot.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

My pleasure ...Any time...:)................

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Added on January 24, 2014
Last Updated on January 25, 2014
Tags: wrong, sadness, fish, chest, breath, trouble, raining, sunlight, help

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Mily
Mily

San Diego , CA



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