Transcend

Transcend

Transcend and triumph with desire.
No more belonging to this mire.
Eyes brimming with undying fire
and dreams of flying higher.

Desert every aggravating need;
those mouths to feed...
and implant the seed
of your liberation creed!

Fate is what you choose.
So, find your own muse.
Those who wait always lose,
grow old and face the blues.

Author's Note

enjoy.

Reviews

[Dave]

INDEED!!

Take care - Dave

[gram linski]

as an old f**k who loves the blues, loved this poem too

[Sir Robert Robbie Lord ..]

yes, enjoy, don't wait, baby-bop, we're nongauranteed love
this poem was awesome!

[Shadow Paradox]

Beautiful and quite inspiring! I real needed this. A nice uplifting read and refreshing. Rising above and beyond the darkness of this life to help others and make our dreams explode like fireworks. This is my thoughts on this. Will be added to my favorites.

[Dark Heart of Winter]

I like it :) The language might be a bit too flowery--perhaps obscuring the message a little--but that's just my opinion.

[Inspiring Writer]

Your this last one stanza's An Incredible one
Fate is what you choose.
So, find your own muse.
Those who wait always lose,
grow old and face the blues.... awesome Rhyme, powerful words, deep thought and Beautiful imaginary. An excellent work once again by you.

[Kal]

Nice!

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. :) My favorite stanza:

"Transcend and triumph with desire.
No more belonging to this mire.
Eyes brimming with undying fire
and dreams of flying higher."

[Nick.B]

A great read, rhymes very well, and has a point towards destiny and our path towards life...great job

[SeaBreezes]

It was short and I like that very much. Beautiful rhyme!