Glass Heart

A story of a naked soul

Glass Heart

 

When you invade my mind,

I desperately try to lie, but fail.

I look for a sanctuary I cannot find,

for I am the one you always trail.

 

My skin is see-through.

I am naked before your eyes.

I am the only thing true

and free of sought-after lies.

 

Tell me it is all right my lass;

words that will never scatter,

since my heart is that of glass.

Tell me that does not matter.

Author's Note

reviews are welcomed~
*Edited.

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

By the Eternal girl I really enjoyed this piece you do have a way with words your talent is still growing though when it matures you will be one poet(ess) to be reckoned with!

[M.Kilani]

very professional !! as your other poems this is outstanding !! I really admire your style of writing . keep it up

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Simply beautiful.

[Iota]

your heart may be made of glass, your skin even transparent absent of lies and deceit but know it takes great strength and bravery to expose your heart like this. More people should be so transparent and vulnerable when it comes to their hearts.

[r]

Omfg! I love this so much. It is such a beautiful poem! Well done!

[MiidniightSoul]

Such a beautiful poem.

[Dutch Jr.]

A vulnerable heart...

A very vivid poem, and I can feel your lines, especially ones like "I am naked before your eyes"... very good poem.

[Luke Logan]

Free me from my youthful tether...

[Blue tailed kite]

Loved it!! Awesome poem!! Its so simple and yet so expressive.. enjoyed thoroughly

[JustWantLove]

Beautiful!