Dose of fear

strange realizations

Dose of fear

This dose of fear was good
for me; just a lesson I misunderstood.
Please, give me one more chance,
just another piercing glance,
for you never looked me in the eyes
ever again. I promise no more lies.

Fear became my strangest convection,
manifested through introspection,
for I lost you in my innocence,
in my ignorant impatience.
You became my reason
in this Autumn season.

This fear pushes me to react
somehow against this fact,
that I long to erase my shame
and have you call out my name,
but with my memories on your side,
I would always run away and hide.

Maybe, just maybe I'll wave my hand
and you probably will never understand.
I wish to erase your bad memories
of me, atleast keep daily courtesies,
and simply have you smile
at me, just once in a while.

Reviews

[Ross Saunders]

I loved the pacing in this. Very quick and had a great flow.

[Ashley Myers]

Awwwwww!

[Adam :P]

fear good poem i liked it.

[Tate Morgan]

We all have fears and sometimes they are well founded But regrets are worse Conquer fears or regrets will destroy you

[Bard Constantine]

Interesting perspective of fear; perhaps fear of the relationship failing? This was a nicely written piece; I enjoyed the way you make the emotion felt in the lines...

[We are young.]

I liked this a lot, 'I wish to earase ypur bad memories of me, at least keep daily courtesies.' That was my favorite line. I really liked the rhythm of this as well, and your word choice was unique. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Fear can create a needed wall. A hidden story in this poem. It is hard when you are in range of someone who you need separation from. A powerful poem. Great description and story in your words.
Coyote

[chillz]

0.o outstanding work...it was a lovely write great job ^_^

[nono]

Ah, well we all have a fear I hate heights but the thing is I love them. I'm scared of water, because I've almost drowned several times, but I don't want to stink also I love swimming :D I'm scared of eating, because I almost chocked to death, but I'd rather choke then die because I didn't eat. Ironic right? haha Nice job this really is something. Keep up the good work I look forward to more of your work

[deeps]

This is simply outstanding! I really enjoyed this, I can feel the meotions protrayed. This is a very heart felt write. Well written!