A plea to heaven

A plea to heaven

A Poem by black.butterfly
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For the tears we wept
over the regrets we kept
and the sadness we slept
away in the life we left.

White prayers reach to heaven.
Even though the skies are seven
and wings are never given,
please answer our vision.

Here our plea starts.
Angels, save our hearts,
so that our past departs,
for we are the broken parts.

Thus, our light shall never be slimmer,
never a hindered glimmer,
never marching to a different drummer,
until our futures shimmer.



© 2011 black.butterfly


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Lovely write

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Posted 12 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. The rhyming was great. I disagree with YouOweYouPay; I think the drummer fit great. Never stop writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not sure about the 'drummer' in such a serene, sorrowful poem, but all else is fine. You write good rhymes and meaningful prayers. Beautiful. Keep it up.

"Angels, save our hearts,
so that our past departs,
for we are the broken parts."

Posted 13 Years Ago


"for we are the broken parts", Lovely. Your poems are full of feeling


Posted 13 Years Ago


That was very interesting and im guessing not easy to writ

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Great choice of words. This was truly amazing!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the first stanza;
For the tears we wept
over the regrets we kept
and the sadness we slept
away in the life we left.
There are some things we won’t forget and hold dear to our hearts,
But life goes on, we must let go and grow.
Great job, well done.


Posted 13 Years Ago


great write I really enjoyed it! beautiful work ^-^

Posted 13 Years Ago


A powerful and beautiful poem. I do believe prayers do assist us. It help us feel we are not alone. A very good ending of a outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 7, 2011
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